This is a draft submission of a 10k dissertation.
I hope you can help with rewriting my first submission on tutor\’s feedback. Intro and abstract should be included.
The dissertation is focusing on 2 sites in London.
I hope you can be confident on writing these 2 sites. Just try to make it vague at first. And you can set tasks(blanks) for future research on these 2 sites.
The second half about landscape may not be included anymore as it is not related.
I hope you can also help me find sources and articles/books about this dissertation.
If this submission could go successfully, I would be very glad to work with you on the rest of this dissertation.